Dear Teacher, here you have the improved letter. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enquire about this year's Global Peace Camp, which I read about on your posts in my high school corridors and in your website. I was so interested to know about your camp, especially your study technology classes. I am going to study information and communications technology engineering at university and the camp sounds like excellent inspiration for future projects. I would be very grateful if you could send me some more information. I also have a few questions about the camp, which I hope you will be able to answer. First of all, please could you tell me what the package and personal accomodation will be like? Will I be sharing a room with a lot of other campers? Will I be able to select a room to share with my friends? I would prefer to have a private room for my frien